tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9222390780170596544.post1804327695910147517..comments2023-11-05T03:41:45.599-08:00Comments on Legend of the Protectors: Literal or FigurativeUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9222390780170596544.post-11453044435034346562009-01-23T10:20:00.000-08:002009-01-23T10:20:00.000-08:00Funny thing is, when I went through my ms looking ...Funny thing is, when I went through my ms looking for all the eyes doing something not possible, I was shocked at how many there were. I'm changing a lot of them. But leaving my favs. :)<BR/>And thanks both of ya loverly ladies. :)<BR/>Come comment on the others post for me. K?<BR/>:)Sarah Jensenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18385403676603047861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9222390780170596544.post-60207609745461153762009-01-23T09:53:00.000-08:002009-01-23T09:53:00.000-08:00I agree with Damyanti. I prefer stared, glared, ey...I agree with Damyanti. I prefer stared, glared, eyes boring through, a gaze that doesn't falter, stuff like that.<BR/><BR/>Good luck on your querying process! I also think it's awesome you're hosting the re-crits for the Secret Agent writers. Unfortunately, I wasn't ready for the last round, but intend on doing it this time...if YA is involved.Samanthahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09231706346312491242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9222390780170596544.post-585781372299059962009-01-23T01:32:00.000-08:002009-01-23T01:32:00.000-08:00In my mind, figurative is ok, as long as it has it...In my mind, figurative is ok, as long as it has its place in the scene. It is not poor writing.<BR/><BR/>It does become poor writing if over-used, however. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04283371140346602856noreply@blogger.com